This is pretty good. The drawings are superb. I love how she is still controlling the action even though she is playing sub. Very hot! Hope to see this continue at some point!
Not gonna lie, I initially thought this would be Alison writing "I'm doing well" and cut back and forth between the EPIC amounts of sex she and Torrin are having.
I really envy your slave. She's so cute and pretty. It made me think things i never thought before. Like how i saw her and wished it had happened to me. How i wanted you to turn me into a woman. I'm so confused! What should I do?!
I love how she's still recovering from the experience of a load of his cum exploding in her mouth, not giving her enough time to regain composure and dignity and clean her face which still has cum smeared across her mouth and chin when he forcefully lifts her to throw her across the room like a rag doll where she conveniently (for him -- and maybe her too) lands sprawled across the glass desk in prone position, legs akimbo stretching the hem of her mini skirt up over her hips, her pantied crotch exposed for his easy access as he approaches close behind her ready to see if she can take dicktation and how good she is at performing this vital office work task!
I definitely change to color of the scene intentionally to convey the mood, and I've tried to make different magical effects look different and stick out more than the mood lighting. The girl in Dark Altar is being directly influenced by magic, so her eyes glow. Mistress's eyes glow occasionally due to her innate magical nature.
I don't have an exact system worked out, I just try to make it look right.
Well, done amazing work on this chapter! Look at this page even - the sleepiness in her eyes, the compression of her breasts against his body, the moulding of the sheets to her body. Perfect.
Amazing!! I did think for a moment that the collar was going to trigger his make mind into humility. Flash back to chap 1 when he first changed and thought of what hed be made to do. Best series ever!!
