I like the idea. Would also be possible to close the circle to the other mercs that entered with her. Make her get to see them, make her see one serving as a pony girl, or have one massive monster beast (thinking of an Oger or a centaur) try to get to have his way with her or stand guard, while she recognizes him as a former merc, with nothing of the old self left in there but pure animalistic Lust for her new body.
She's trepidatious and self-conscious, at first, at being so exposed and on display, but then she realizes how beautiful and sexy she looks and how the skimpy bra and panty set compliments her figure and its voluptuous proportions, and she falls in love with the ensemble and how they look on her, practicality gushing with giddy girlishness at how irresistibly temptatious she looks wearing them and can't wait to take them off for the right suitor -- or for that suitor to liberate them of her with unbridled lust as they ravage her femininity with abandon!!
Her expressions are perfect - great to see what's going through her mind. The tags are also a nice touch and help to further build the story here. Kudos once again.
My favorite frame (apart from how wide-open she has to keep her mouth in order to accommodate the girth of the cock she's being forced to suck) is how her eyes flash open from squinting slits as he thrusts his cock inside one more time just as he ejaculates a huge load into her gaping mouth!!!
I love how single-mindedly determined she is to make him cum -- like it's the only thing in the world she wants to do and the only thing in the world for her to do!!
This page, the nun panel and two upcoming pages are some requests I took for fun and practice. I like to take a vague idea and fill out a page to imply a larger story.
The "costume party" panel I did using my characters for a contest on dA. The rest are random scenes or story ideas of mine.
Oh ho ho, yes! Dear me, what a couple of very lucky, generously-blessed ladies! Who wouldnt want an impressive chest like that? Damn... Allison went up a cup size!
Volume 1 and 2 are packed fairly tightly together, it's a continuous series of events. You could slot this in somewhere after the end of Vol.2 and before page 19 of Vol.3 - that's when she decides she's being too easily swept up in things like this.
...only two fingers?! Allison had one hell of a tight gash early-on after her forced-transition!!
Q&A @ the Admin:
If this is an image canon to the ongoing story of Lighter Chains, about where can it be placed in the timeline of her conditioning, issue-wise? If I were to hazard a guess, based upon how short her hair is and how her body language seems to indicate that she's still acclimating herself to her newly-acquired anatomy, I'm gonna go with either Vol. 1 or 2 -- or, perhaps, 1.5.
I love the coy, cross-eyed ditzy-girl expression on Allison's face -- like she's pretending to be such an innocent little girl who doesn't know what she's gotten herself into and yet is so pleased to be with the most-popular jock in school that she wants to do whatever he wants 'cuz she wants to make him happy!!
