I like how in the first frame Allison's half-lidded eyes have the look of welling up with tears and then how wide open they become when the cock she's sucking explodes a gushing geyser of cum in her mouth which she valiantly tries to keep inside but ultimately can't contain all of it!!
I hope that we'll get to see a color version of this scene, or scene fragment, in the upcoming LC issue
Absolutely love it! I'm glad to see something resembling flash technique still lives to this day. Excellent use of slide into frame and other ways of getting animation even when there isn't at the start.
It was mainly an aesthetic choice here. There definitely is a servant hierarchy but it's not so strict. The three of them are basically on the same level with their chunky collars and menial duties.
The two maids act superior to Alison because she is shorter, younger and newer. They're a little taken aback at her ability to "climb the ranks" so quickly, but they take it in stride.
I'm overweight, myself -- not morbidly-obese, mind you, but I do get the occasional remarks about my belly and unsolicited suggestions on what I could do about it. While negative attention about my body does make me feel awkward (to varying degrees depending upon the context of the given situation), I don't take it personally and get all butt-hurt about it.
So take my comment as self-deprecating humor and move-on.
I can just imagine the guy in this sort of looking at the scene and the orb with wide eyes as a million thoughts run through his mind at the possibilities of this... And he used it to make a demon guard cum.
I totally have an entire plot in my mind for PotG2 that I would love to see, but I'm always told that writers don't want to hear it, so they don't get accused of stealing ideas.
if you want people to know this isn't just a cover you should add the cover as a separate, and put something like "animated with text" or "Text Story" on the thumbnail for this :)
This makes me wonder if Torrin hasn't always been the hyper-exaggerated specimen of masculinity that he -- perhaps he's had a similar journey to the one Allison has experienced and is still experiencing?
Maybe he started out as male -- but as one with the less-pronounced physique that Allison had had in her pre-forced-transition mode. Maybe through the trials of being force-transitioned and subsequently broken and thoroughly bottomed and learning to adopt and even embrace his new submissive female identity, Torrin had to prove himself worthy of regaining male status -- a process most initiates don't have the right stuff to achieve that ultimate goal and one which likely will elude Allison for the remainder of her time in this realm, no matter how much lighter her chains become.
I like the idea. Would also be possible to close the circle to the other mercs that entered with her. Make her get to see them, make her see one serving as a pony girl, or have one massive monster beast (thinking of an Oger or a centaur) try to get to have his way with her or stand guard, while she recognizes him as a former merc, with nothing of the old self left in there but pure animalistic Lust for her new body.
Melody does seem the type to fall victim to clever thinking and teamwork. I'd like to see the Shy one brought out of her shell while her sister's taken down a few notches.
This moment is so hard on the psychological level. Realizing what you've lost (but at the same time, gained) from undergoing such a PERFECT transformation. There's no questions asked here.
You are the best TG MTF artist in the world. You capture it so brilliantly.
Thank you for doing what you do. The world needs more people like you.
