I totally have an entire plot in my mind for PotG2 that I would love to see, but I'm always told that writers don't want to hear it, so they don't get accused of stealing ideas.
if you want people to know this isn't just a cover you should add the cover as a separate, and put something like "animated with text" or "Text Story" on the thumbnail for this :)
This makes me wonder if Torrin hasn't always been the hyper-exaggerated specimen of masculinity that he -- perhaps he's had a similar journey to the one Allison has experienced and is still experiencing?
Maybe he started out as male -- but as one with the less-pronounced physique that Allison had had in her pre-forced-transition mode. Maybe through the trials of being force-transitioned and subsequently broken and thoroughly bottomed and learning to adopt and even embrace his new submissive female identity, Torrin had to prove himself worthy of regaining male status -- a process most initiates don't have the right stuff to achieve that ultimate goal and one which likely will elude Allison for the remainder of her time in this realm, no matter how much lighter her chains become.
I like the idea. Would also be possible to close the circle to the other mercs that entered with her. Make her get to see them, make her see one serving as a pony girl, or have one massive monster beast (thinking of an Oger or a centaur) try to get to have his way with her or stand guard, while she recognizes him as a former merc, with nothing of the old self left in there but pure animalistic Lust for her new body.
Melody does seem the type to fall victim to clever thinking and teamwork. I'd like to see the Shy one brought out of her shell while her sister's taken down a few notches.
This moment is so hard on the psychological level. Realizing what you've lost (but at the same time, gained) from undergoing such a PERFECT transformation. There's no questions asked here.
You are the best TG MTF artist in the world. You capture it so brilliantly.
Thank you for doing what you do. The world needs more people like you.
yes please... I'd love to see these two get temperamental, shape-shift below the belt, and then 'defy' Melody from both ends at once, ifyaknowhatimean...
My favorite thing about this panel is the contrast between the twins: the modesty of the one on the left vs. the IDGAF body language of her sister on the right -- I can tell she's gonna be a problem for Melody, but that'll just make her breaking all the more enjoyable to witness (perhaps she might need an assist from her mistress' in order to break her completely)!!
Feet are one of the most underappreciated elements of a woman's body. Alison has the most beautiful pair of feet in human existence. I'm so glad they're being emphasized.
I think the problem is that you can't rewind it and go to the previous page. You only can go forward. But that can be solved by adding a button in the lower left corner. Second problem I can imagine is that probably some people want to save separate pages as jpg or png on their hard drives. And thus mp4 does not solve their problem. Maybe if you don't want to lose some of the anmation make alternate version a series of gif's?
On other note. I personally like this story and format. It is funny because it looks as if you did a fanfic of your own work :D
Sorry Admin, the MP4 is a great addition but still not low enough tech for us viewers. Perhaps you can send printouts to our mailing addresses? Thanks a ton
I really liked this story arc. The ending was a nice touch, but I almost want an epilogue, just giving a bit more of an explanation on how it all happened. Also, I kind of think she should totally get a "reputation" on the server... It could be both beneficial and yet also negative, depending on how fast it spreads...
Please .....go back to the previous format of static jpgs....etc This interactive thing is both problematic on my computer and frankly annoying....or post a low tech alternative
