Loved the "training montage" for femininity. A good length of time has passed in between per scene. You, as the artist, kept really good track of it. It's interesting that "Allison" just fell into the groove of it, so easily. Her body, her hair, her eyelashes all show signs of it. Her body has put on more weight. Her eyelashes grew out more. Her hair grew longer. And more subtle changes all do show that "Mistress" was fairly correct in her initial choice. Excellent work.
I like her different dresses. Very nice, if the building has good climate-controls. Not very good if she should happen to go out.
Is that going to happen? Should be interesting to see what the world outside looks like. Might be kind of hard for Alison to contact whatever "Underground" that may exist out there. After all, how could he prove who he is to the Resistance?
So this woman who used to be a man is a natural mimic? Or her physical skills are such that she is adapting very easily. Either suggests that when she was a "he", he was a highly skilled athlete. Probably, since he was a mercenary, he was a very skillful martial artist.
Is that the reason why her manacles haven't been reduced over time? After all, you do suggest that she has been a captive for a while. Or Mistress has used some method to speed up her hair's growth.
I thought that you would. The quality of your work is too good for you to be an amateur. I was particularly impressed with the feelings that Alison was expressing. Her anxiety was delicious in the first part and the total adoration she had in the last part was just plain lovely.
I've seen the wooden models and I doubt that they would be sufficiently flexible for the poses you'd need here. On the other hand, there must be software that could be useful to you.
I have some 3D models that I use for reference. They keep things generally in proportion and help out with perspective and mirror shots especially, but I often make changes to show the things that I want to show. Here I was mainly concentrating on mistress's pose and the penetration action (naturally) and I didn't go back and do a sanity check on Alison's leg positioning.
I also have a blank figma model, which is way better than any of those wooden artist's models I've seen, but I only have one and the proportions and height are standard. Mistress and Alison have a large height difference and slightly supernatural proportions, which makes the 3D models a better option.
Artists often use models, right? It sounds stupid, but there are highly articulated manikins that you can use without hiring somebody. On the other hand, though the picture in question made me wonder as well, the psychology of it is pretty interesting.
Alison's legs in the first panel don't make sense to me. Mistress lying down between her legs and is holding the left leg upright and so she would have to have her weight on the right leg (unless Alison had a 20 inch thigh gap). Alison shouldn't be able to keep the right leg upright too.
I do JavaScript and I know the effort it takes to make something like this simply work in development let alone function across platforms. The random pacing is brilliant, the results: outstanding. Bravo!
just wondering, but is there a chance you make a demonize version of her? I mean like an view of the ending where she may have ask Mistress to make her a succubus and her daughter and she is married to the male demon who first visited. Also can you do it with both of them in office wear?
I just watched a movie, Valerian, by Director Luke Besson (The Fifth Element, Nikita, The Professional) that was a cinematographic feast among other accolades. Lighter Chains has a lot of the feel of Besson's SciFi story about an other-worldly race that is being attacked as terrible enemies. As with your Alison, two military operatives, a man and woman team from the attackers side, find out that these so-called enemies are people just like them only more advanced. Check it out.
And thank you for more great, sensuous story telling in dialog and wonderful imagery.
Great to see this story unfolding more. Thank you for adding to the tale. Any montage would be welcome. Your artwork is phenomenal especially when used to tell a story like this one.
Aww.. poor allison. That girl deserves a pedicure and a footrub. She's been through a lot I'd say. She needs some relaxing pampering. She very much deserves it.
Speaking of which, are you in any way interested in doing some close up images emphasizing Allison's feet? I'd gladly commission me them if you are.