I really like this series, you can definitely tell her progress is accelerating fast, I love that, but I'm also afraid that might mean the end of the story is near :(
I don't want to unduly criticize such a talented artist, but if it's useful feedback: somehow these scenes with her and the mistress fucking just haven't been as sexy to me as much of the rest of this series has been. I don't know why exactly. I really want them to be, but somehow they're just not doing it for me. I wish I could be more constructive and specific with this criticism.
There is no romance with mistress, not anything that isnt one sided. Mistress is training, but especially conditioning the new sex slave. Thats her job. Hence teaching her how to be with both sexes, but obviously the with a man part was going to take more work. Thats why mistress got her used to sex as a source of pleasure and comfort, then started acclimatizing her to penetration regularly before she started taking her around town to be around men, and you can bet that the area she took her was filed with the better crop of male specimens. You need to accompany mistress was a pretext to get the main character around flesh and blood men now that her defended had been completely obliterated.
That doesnt mean that the main character wont still have relations with Mistrsss, or other women, but Remember that this kind of role is what the OC always wanted deep down.
Yeah, she does look like she's checking him out. Notice the sword he's carrying? Compare that to the machine in the first few panels of the first book. It's hard for me to put the two together. That big sphere couldn't have been made (in our world) when swords were effective weapons. But the man wasn't dressed like he was wearing ceremonial clothes, so the juxtaposition of the two is very interesting.
Yes, ENM, Alison is NOT looking into his eyes, is she. Her stare is straight ahead and at her height.... well.... I think she is totally mesmerized by the view and what it might be like to ...
Great artistry and I do love this whole, well-told story. It's captivating!
The facial expressions say soooo much of whats going on in Alisons head. All was as expected (taught)until the last frame (I don't think Melody taught her to be clingy). And Alisons face as she hides behind mistress doesn't look like fear at all. Mistress could be a tad annoyed... Guess we have to wait and see.! Thanks for the great work and story line!
I don't know. I think Mistress looks a little... annoyed? Not quite, but maybe she's wondering why Alison is so clingy. She might have liked the clingyness at first, but maybe she's getting tired of it.
On the other hand, Alison is tiny compared to the figures we've seen, and her sexual transformation had to have been out and out traumatic. Under the circumstances, I'd be clingy, too.
SuspensionOfDisbelief, precisely the scene you're describing occurred in the last 8 pages of Vol 3. It's specifically referenced on page 20 of Vol 4 as one of the reasons the protagonist isn't putting up so much of a fight anymore.
(Also, while I'm commenting, bravo and thanks to the author for sharing this amazing work! :-) )
Thank you for continuing your uniquely stylistic "Chains" collection, now 4-plus volumes, of artistry that superbly blends wonderful renderings, dialog and plot into a well-paced, fantastical journey that entertains on many levels. Cheers!
Maybe it's her new hormones going through her but if my enemy turned me into a girl I wouldn't be so calm and submissive about it. Maybe a scene was needed to explain why she stopped giving up fighting her and slowly accepted her new place in the world.
This was just a concept cover for the bits and pieces of the Lady Link x Gannon comic. The comic does not really have a coherent plot which is why it's in the sketch and bonus galleries instead of the main comic page.
Ooowee! Alison's really getting into rug munching. I can't blame her/him. But maybe she has acquired a certain perspective that I lack. I've always wondered what it would be like to be a woman.
