Your work is sublime, take your time. Honestly, having a few chapters in monocolor wouldn't be the worst thing either, Genie and Wetware have engaging stories regardless.
Who else is thinking "Damnit stop being so ungrateful... you don't want to be in a gorgeous body and get fucked like an animal in heat? Then let me take your place!!!"
He wished for "unrivaled sexual power and technique" but failed to specify that those be male heterosexual. Further, he directed the woman be an obedient slut who wants it and will "absolutely" enjoy herself.
Before they started posting pages from this comic in earnest (or once the early few pages had been posted), the admin posted one-off mock-ups of individual characters posed standing up. The male and female variants of this "protagonist" character each had a page to themselves
I love how this removes any preconceived notion that Alison is for Torrin's exclusive use. She understands pretty early on that her role is determined at the whim of her Master. She is entitled to nothing, all while Torrin receives the credit of being a graceful host.
This is an odd comment to make, I know, but the interesting thing about this pic for me is the mystery as to why she (the sub in the process of being bound by the muscular ram-girl) has one sock on one foot but not on the other?...
I disagree. I think the brunette and blonde are two different dudes who both had the exact same series of wishes. The genies are making them fuck each other in a loop.
I have a theory that there's gonna be some level of possession involved, because on page 13, the girl our protagonist is about to become has brown eyes, like the genie. But, originally he had light colored eyes.
For 'I am tying' should it be trying, or going for a sort of pun?
And yes can't wait for the next parts of the time loop with the body changes and beautification. Not to sure about the mental changes but we will see how that goes.
So its obvious hes turned into the girl he just had sex with. Based off of what one of the genies said about remembering, does that mean that he will eventually become the genie?
I think its really interesting how this second take has iterated on the first. The outfits ever so slightly different, who knows what else will be different this time.
Also, I know she's about to get longer hair (if your hints on the Images page are what I'm thinking) but I really love the cute short hair she has. It really emphasizes her cute face, big eyes, and big... well, everything else.
The best part of all of this, as is with all of this lovely artist's work, is you know she is going to end up SO happy. The changes are always forced, and there's always a little fun resistance but every "victim" finds their place, and they never want to leave. Bravo!
