First and foremost the artist needs room to be creative! That being given I also hope this one is continued at some point...
As an active kinkster who is into rough body play I must say it would be really cool if a safe word was worked into this somehow... like a certain position gets uncomfortable and she says "uh, yellow... left arm is getting pulled too high..." and he checks in just before he REALLY starts pounding her...
See if this were me I would be saying "oh no! do you have to leave me in this gorgeous, super-sensitive/horny body? *wink* *wink* I hope there are no side effects... like being stuck in this form forever... perhaps with a tentacle monster companion maybe...?"
Reminder: The protag never specifically wished for a sex partner to be brought to the house, let alone one that's actually himself from the future, so this is 100% on the genie.
I'm wondering if she'll be the first to say she wants to stay as a woman or if this will be the first comic you've written where someone swaps back to there original gender.
This (in the second panel) is a new deep throat X-ray perspective, and it's cool but also kind of confusing; took me a while to figure out what was what, which kinda took me out of the moment. I think side-view works best for X-ray of this kind of position. (But generally great job, please continue!)
...looks like thicc girl had no idea her mistress packed this much heat -- guess this'll be a lesson not to wiggle that curvy ass of hers so much when walking around others!!
...lovin' the x-ray cutaway effect on this one -- especially seeing the cock go so far down our protagonist's throat and the path the cum erupting from it takes to her stomach!!
The only thing that could make this panel any better is if it were animated 'cuz it'd be kool to see her eyes go from tightly squinted to wide open
It's like Allison is caught in a sexual catch-22 here: so annoyed at being objectified for how amply proportioned her busty chest is, she folds her arms to express her disgust -- an act which only draws more attention to those supersized mammaries of hers that she can't do anything to hide from view, annoying her even more!!
The only one who had no idea whatsoever that the protagonist in this story would become such a shameless deep throat queen in no time was they, themselves -- we all knew that this inevitability was coming (er. "cumming") for them, and that they'd take it to-the-hilt with abandon!!!
Oh ho ho, yes! Dear me, what a couple of very lucky, generously-blessed ladies! Who wouldnt want an impressive chest like that? Damn... Allison went up a cup size!
The way Allison's womanly hips rock against Torin in the second frame and how her bootilicious ass backs into him willing his well-endowed cock into her oh-so hungry pussy in the third frame and how her voluptuous tits heave in both 2 and 3 and the fluttering of her eyes in 2 and how they go half-lidded in 3 -- all of these details make this panel so intoxicating no matter how many times I view it!!!
