Let this be a warning to those who neglect to read the fine print of the EUA before reflexively declaring it TL;DR and clicking "OK" -- unless, that is, you subconsciously want to be fucked over, then by all means, skip ahead and may damned be the consequences!!!
If another chapter does get commissioned, I'd love to see what the transformation process looked like. Show a side-by-side recap of the events of comic1 with a real world view of him changing into a woman while playing the game. Your mtf-transformation in Light Chains 1 is my favorite.
I really liked this story arc. The ending was a nice touch, but I almost want an epilogue, just giving a bit more of an explanation on how it all happened. Also, I kind of think she should totally get a "reputation" on the server... It could be both beneficial and yet also negative, depending on how fast it spreads...