I start with a general concept, then build up an outline with a few scene ideas, then move on to a specific page breakdown. The page breakdown will have dialog and actions written out, sometimes it's just [they argue] or [they fuck] and I fill in the details later.
I usually have the entire page breakdown written before starting a comic. For this comic I would sketch a few pages, do the dialog to make sure the page breaks lined up, then color that batch, then post and start on the next batch. If you're asking if I made this up as I went along, no - the loop was the concept from the beginning. When I got the the overlapping parts I massaged the dialog and action a bit to make sure things mostly fit with what I had already written.
For the next comic, Crossworld VR, I rough sketched the entire comic with complete dialog before coloring anything. Partially for efficiency but also since it was a commission I wanted the customer to approve the plot before I commit to a huge amount of work.
I put it to a vote and the Patrons overwhelmingly voted the images to go public. So I have scheduled the images/sketches/animations to be released on thursdays.
You know... I've had this suspicion for a while now. I think our new girl is on the start of this loop by becoming the genie that will eventually turn her into a girl, leave her utterly fucked (figuratively, literally AND metaphorically) before throwing herself to her genie boss to save herself from the punishment that she has forgotten from ages past she gave herself...
Hard to tell with the art style but the look close enough to be likely twins, yes?
That "mmh..." of Allison's in the bottom frame makes me think her Mistress sank her fake cock all the way inside her in one unrelenting thrust in spite of the resistance from her still-virgin-tight pussy -- it hurts, but the full-body ecstatic sensation she's experiencing from the complete penetration overrides the pain!!!
Ooooo, this girl is about to experience the punishing sensation of an enormously long and girthy demon dick relentlessly power-slamming her holes at-will whether or not she enjoys experiencing the ordeal that is her lot to endure!!
Love the detailed, 1st-person description of the transformation and the glowing elements in the illustrations that demonstrate internal anatomical changes. Great device!
I begin to transform I strip down in front of a mirror with barbara and joe watching just me in my boxer underwear suddenly I turn and Im a hot naked chick the mens boxers are to small and they hug so tightly I have a cameltoe and the underwear are so stretched you can see my vagina with big juicy lips I moan and turn around and my new huge ass is being flattened I put the shirt back on and its so tight that the topps of my boobs poke out you can clearly see two bumps where my nipples are through my shirt
...perhaps a mix of both: post-coital satisfaction and and fatigue from the demanding workout needed to achieve that state of total and complete satisfaction?!
What I like about this panel Lady Link panel is how it's hard to tell if she's exhausted and recovering from the savage fucking she just endured or if she's actually luxuriating in the sensation of feeling the pool of smegma cooling in the small of her back and on her ass cheeks (there does seem to be a faint hint of a slight smile of contentedness on her face)!!!
The protag got what they wanted, plus more, yet they have the gall to complain after-the fact?!?!
Also, something tells me that this genie herself has been thru what this protag just experienced what with the sadistic pleasure she's taking in rubbing salt in the wound!
No, but protag did wish for unrivaled sexual power and technique. Paraphrasing the genie that has to be taught manually, and how else to be unrivaled than to have experienced both?
I love what you've done in this pic with just emphasizing how girly she's become. Her little pink toenails! I know you're not into feet but to me, that's one of the cutest parts of her body.
For all of us foot fans out there, could you tell us what her size is?
Damn, that little hiss of satisfaction she lets out there when she feels the cum splash against her jaw, just perfect. As if his climax was as powerful to her as if it had been her own.
This really makes me want to see Allison take a cock in her mouth. That said, I'd want to see it in a chapter not in side content. I want to see her submit to giving a blowjob, not through the encouragement of a master or mistress, but through a desire all of her own.
