Great First Act!

How exciting! I dig this new format. :V

I like it a lot. It's very good for a first time experience of a story.

However, I do hope you will also make individual pages available. I can't say I like the idea of clicking through comic pages to find The Page that I'm looking for as material.

Not finishing loading for me on iPhone

The last box isnt work with my iPhone

Still nothing here :(

Ya it does not load for me also on iPhone

That final box/checkmark was stuck and it was perpetually loading, but it seems to be fixed now!

A month later, I realized that need to click to change frame and there are a lot of frames! XD

Will thier be another comic to continue the story? The first one was very good and this it also great

I agree with ANON it is very nice to read & watch but individual panels would be nice as well.

if you want people to know this isn't just a cover you should add the cover as a separate, and put something like "animated with text" or "Text Story" on the thumbnail for this :)