I hope we get to see some of this story someday! I love the idea of a fun and ditzy slime girl trying to take on an adventurer herself, leading to some extremely cute and erotic interactions.
I can imagine Star trying to disarm him by attempting to remove his clothes and weapons only for her to surmise that his most vulnerable point must be in his pants lol.
If you are going to do a prequel, can you make her the same ethnicity as a man? I see this a lot with TG stories. You rarely if ever see an Asian or black man transform and if there's an Asian or black woman, she was previously a white man.
If you have already made the story and the character was previously white... fine. But I'm just saying this as food for thought for next time.
I love the less-obvious touches, like the green panels and ribbed front on Mistress' bodysuit, and the way she's painted/covered her horns to look like Bowser's.
It's like Allison's got swept away by the sensation and rhythm of bobbing her head up and down on Torrin's cock, enjoying the taste of his shaft with every thrust of the head past her tongue, that she forgot to prepare herself for the task of swallowing the explosion of cum about to fill her mouth and not choke on it!!
Would be funny to see a page where she has completely lost track of how many penalties she's accumulated. "This is annoying, but I'm only stuck as a girl for like a month, two months tops!" and then a real counter shows up in the corner saying "254 days left!"