I love how she's still recovering from the experience of a load of his cum exploding in her mouth, not giving her enough time to regain composure and dignity and clean her face which still has cum smeared across her mouth and chin when he forcefully lifts her to throw her across the room like a rag doll where she conveniently (for him -- and maybe her too) lands sprawled across the glass desk in prone position, legs akimbo stretching the hem of her mini skirt up over her hips, her pantied crotch exposed for his easy access as he approaches close behind her ready to see if she can take dicktation and how good she is at performing this vital office work task!
I definitely change to color of the scene intentionally to convey the mood, and I've tried to make different magical effects look different and stick out more than the mood lighting. The girl in Dark Altar is being directly influenced by magic, so her eyes glow. Mistress's eyes glow occasionally due to her innate magical nature.
I don't have an exact system worked out, I just try to make it look right.
Well, done amazing work on this chapter! Look at this page even - the sleepiness in her eyes, the compression of her breasts against his body, the moulding of the sheets to her body. Perfect.
Amazing!! I did think for a moment that the collar was going to trigger his make mind into humility. Flash back to chap 1 when he first changed and thought of what hed be made to do. Best series ever!!
Its funny cuz my dysphoria is horrible, but having these comics helps me cope. But I wish so bad I was Alison, hell, I look like her pre transformation. Like, eerily similar. So, thanks so much for this comic. Its been great to have this the past years to help imagine myself a non shitty life. Thanks for these comics.im a huge fan
Okay, here's a theory. I think the colors of the collars have different meanings. Back in Dark Alter, the girl's collar seemed to amplify emotions of desire, and in combination with a number of enchanted orbs in the room, manifested into a masculine being. Looking at the color of her collar, I'd say it could be Magenta, which is supposed to be the color of Harmony and emotional balance. I think that the girl in that story was an enemy combatant with some sort of magical ability, who was forced in that room to subdue her desire to fight by manifesting her desires to submit creating balance.
In Alison's case, her collar being blue might represent trust and loyalty. Torrin is the first man she's ever been with, something that must've been difficult for her, considering her past. Even leading up to sex, she trusts him in their day-to-day and with the massage. Now that she trusts him enough to have sex, the collar is responding to him, which could mean it's promoting a loyalty in Alison towards Torrin.
Actually, looking over this entire chapter, color plays a HUGE part in the progression of the story. It starts with Pink which is tender and compassionate, to Turquoise with control and self-sufficiency to black with fear and mystery, to indigo with intuition, to pg. 15 where Alison is literally Pink in contrast to Torrin's Blue, to sexy time in pink (back to that unconditional love), to Alison through her collar being the one who's blue.
Admin-sama, do you have a color fetish or am I just bananas??!
Been re-reading the series for the hundredth time over. The bit of dialogue about how she's reminded about her former unit really sticks out to me. It's funny how really innocent thoughts from long before transitioning make complete sense now, especially when there's desire on both ends. It's actually really sweet, just like the rest of this comic!
Frame 1: "Torin reached over, parted my lips, and pressed his fingers into my clit. I released a loud scream--my body completely paralyzed as he rubbed my womanhood. Shots of plesaure pulsated though my whole body." Frame 2: "He rolled me on top of him, pressing his cock further into my G spot. I had never felt so helpless and so completely satisfied at the same time! The stimulation was otherworldly" Frame 3: "Before I knew it, I was cumming harder than I had ever came before"
"With a gentle guiding hand, Torin pressed even deeper inside of me. I took a deep breath, adjusting to the maddening penetration. When I relinquished control, he eagerly took over. My address bounced against his hips, and I could feel the tip of his cock on my G spot, driving me more and more insane with list. Right when I thought that I couldn't handle it anymore, he took it a step further"
Frame 2: "the sensation of his cock inside me was unlike anything I had experienced thus far with mistress. Her toys were lifeless imitations of what was real. Not only was Torin's throbbing manhood larger, but the warmth if his flesh melded with mine in an extraordinaryway. My mind was screaming for a way out, but my body was entranced in ecstasy--and there was no way it would not get what it desired. Involuntarily, My hips began to rock back against him." Frame 3: "My male consciousness was a helpless prisoner, trapped in a conflicted steady rhythm. This phantom source of ecstasy behind me was so mysterious and strange--and I had to explore more."
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