Independent of the story, her expression in this pic makes me think of a scenario where a thin weak nerd comes into a gym seeking to bulk up and become an "alpha" only to fail so miserably he gets fairly quickly turned into a girl as the hyper-masculine magic of the gym drains his manhood away. This is the facial expression just after being freshly transformed: pure bewilderment.
I actually prefer the original. I know, I'm weird. But I like art more than I like AI. The filters can be good for backgrounds, but I think it often sucks the soul out of the characters.
I, for one, hope that this isn't the last we get to see of this character and hope that we see a series developed from this concept. I think it would rival Lighter Chains in terms of quality!
Utilized available tools to proactively assist upper management, handled large workload, leveraged employee empowerment by training new hires. Major progress in all areas. 5/5 exceeds expectations
Throughout the entire Lighter Chains comics so far it's actually been at least 2 days (went through and counted time changes not including anything mentioned through text... Reliving things was wonderful) and Allison has been female for 3 full nights now
Yeah! This is very good work here. Allison is so scared you can see her sweating. Well, not yet, anyway. S/He doesn't want to be fucked by somebody else.
You know, that's a part of this story that seems to have been left behind. She may look like a woman, but she's a man and it has been only hours, for her, since she changed. I'll bet most of your readers have forgotten that. But that's part of the basic tenor of this site. Men who are changed against their will, and end up loving it. I think that you need to remind your fans of this.
Allison is most men's wet dream. He has to be hating it, but he's so pulled into Mistress' web that he is practically lost. But he should remember this, sooner or later, and there should be some inner thoughts about how he is feeling. Maybe another weak rebellion, but definitely thoughts of shame and fear. How could he love being fucked? Is he gay? etc, etc.
Using the frame for depth here was very well done.
Also I like how "mistress" took the time to change into something more comfortable. Definitely gives some credence to Allison wondering about time passage.
