Purply eyes. Seems like she's not exactly in full possession of her wits. I wish I knew more of the backstory. Hopefully, the Writer will fill things in a bit.
She has a tattoo on her face and on her shoulder. I assure you they are supposed to be stationary. Drawing is hard.
In retrospect, it's a terrible character design because I have to draw the tattoo all the time and I don't even have a firm design for it, I just scribble some vaguely tribal and nautical looking lines. It pretty much rules out any animation.
She'd have to looking into a reflective surface - do demons have smooth, really shiny chests? - to have the glow of her eyes show in the big mirror. Or have her head turned a lot more around than it is.
On the other hand, I can see why you included it. I don't expect perfection, anyway. Plus, I couldn't draw this well to save my life.
The story is so interesting. This chick is a major league breast girl, isn't she? We've seen this from a different perspective, and at a different time, place, and breast-massager.
I hope not. Your work reminds me a lot of Incase's stuff. Really fantastic sexy times, with situations and characters that I actually want to watch for their own right.
The color quality, the line work, all are done so well. I wish I could draw like that.
But, she has all those snazzy tattoos - I would think that she'd have had a pretty good idea of what was going down... I mean, besides her down into the hole. The fact that the creature coming through - looks a bit like Mistress in general layout - is confined would suggest that the guys who tossed her in are trying to keep things under control, so to speak.
This is very different from where Alison is. Maybe the whatzit coming through isn't as well mannered as Mistress and her people are.
Well, it doesn't look like her clone. Kinda big, and that... thing hanging between its legs doesn't really go with any sort of femininity that I'd go for.
I just found the series, and was instantly hooked. This has become a new favourite comic for me.
Its not simply a quick "skim and masturbate" story - its a highly detailed, devoted storyline. The characters are well written and fairly realistic, given the plot.
Eagerly awaiting updates.
(Oh, and best of luck to you, the Author, with balancing projects as well as real life)