I know it's a strange thing to say but I love how curly you made Lynn's hair :D
Also that expression in the final panel <3

Hehe I like Melody :D And Slave Girl looks cute in her new outfit <3

Good Ending Link is adorable <3

Then again so is panel 3 Link xD

Great use of colours to set the mood too :)

Oooh new outfit and hairdo, looks cute :)

Very cute, I especially like the final frame <3