I like it. Seems to me you've really gotten more or less where you wanted to go with this, and even the "lifelike" version is still way better when you started down this path. I'd love to see "Better This Way," or "Lighter Chains" shown this way.

Its like shes reacting to a bunch of people teasing her. "Haha! You got turned into a hottie! I bet you're gonna be such a slut!"