Using the frame for depth here was very well done.
Also I like how "mistress" took the time to change into something more comfortable. Definitely gives some credence to Allison wondering about time passage.
Yeah! This is very good work here. Allison is so scared you can see her sweating. Well, not yet, anyway. S/He doesn't want to be fucked by somebody else.
You know, that's a part of this story that seems to have been left behind. She may look like a woman, but she's a man and it has been only hours, for her, since she changed. I'll bet most of your readers have forgotten that. But that's part of the basic tenor of this site. Men who are changed against their will, and end up loving it. I think that you need to remind your fans of this.
Allison is most men's wet dream. He has to be hating it, but he's so pulled into Mistress' web that he is practically lost. But he should remember this, sooner or later, and there should be some inner thoughts about how he is feeling. Maybe another weak rebellion, but definitely thoughts of shame and fear. How could he love being fucked? Is he gay? etc, etc.
Throughout the entire Lighter Chains comics so far it's actually been at least 2 days (went through and counted time changes not including anything mentioned through text... Reliving things was wonderful) and Allison has been female for 3 full nights now
I don't recall saying anything like that. I'd rather I speak for myself, if you DON'T mind.
Yeah, I figured she'd only been a "she" for a few hours. And yeah, the art and story has been great. It's too bad the story can't move faster, but The Artist can only produce so fast, and that is what I'm willing to be happy with.
