Its interesting seeing the changes step by step. The way the clothes move with the change of fit over these pages is very good.

the form and posture of the image spanning panels 1 + 2... is so lovely and suggestive. the closed yes, that bend in the wrist, just perfect.

Something about this page has always been a little jarring IMO. The combination of the pants not immediately falling off his/her shrunken frame and the unusual shading on this page make it stick out like a sore thumb.

Your art is great. I like the glow effects