I really like how this story is coming out. Keep it going!

I'd like to see an Afro girl in these situations...That would be awesome, if you agree!

Well, maybe I meant a brunette girl. And about the Afro, the haircut. That's the concept I figured out.

Or... a freckled redhead would be a nice option too. In X-ray pictures like you used to do it. :D

If it makes you feel batter, every race on this planet has been subject to slavery, indentured servituded, forced labor, abuse and torture. If the subject is white, asian, african, native american or whatever makes no difference.

Short-haired Allison kinda resembles Kes from the early seasons of Star Trek Voyager, I just noticed!