I'm not sure why no one has commented on this, but its fantastic. Generally the art which is awesome only gives a voice or character to the female, but this two way interaction gives the scene even more context. The body language, the dialogue coincide beautifully. Nice job!

"Let me here you say it"

I think you meant hear (as it to listen), not here (as in this place).

"... and show me that you mean it -- I'm not sure that I believe you, yet!"