Well, done amazing work on this chapter! Look at this page even - the sleepiness in her eyes, the compression of her breasts against his body, the moulding of the sheets to her body. Perfect.
This is amazing, i love checking in on this comic series, keep up the excellent work.
Typo - "mistress has kind of weird" needs an "a" in their somewhere.
I really love the blinking eyes too. Especially the glancing up to Mel one. Will you be adding this to chapter 1 too?
There's a typo here: "well GET at least get..."
I have to say I really appreciate these opening pages. There's a real economical story telling going on, telling us all we need to know about the world through character dialogue.