So this woman who used to be a man is a natural mimic? Or her physical skills are such that she is adapting very easily. Either suggests that when she was a "he", he was a highly skilled athlete. Probably, since he was a mercenary, he was a very skillful martial artist.
Is that the reason why her manacles haven't been reduced over time? After all, you do suggest that she has been a captive for a while. Or Mistress has used some method to speed up her hair's growth.
I like her different dresses. Very nice, if the building has good climate-controls. Not very good if she should happen to go out.
Is that going to happen? Should be interesting to see what the world outside looks like. Might be kind of hard for Alison to contact whatever "Underground" that may exist out there. After all, how could he prove who he is to the Resistance?
Loved the "training montage" for femininity. A good length of time has passed in between per scene. You, as the artist, kept really good track of it. It's interesting that "Allison" just fell into the groove of it, so easily. Her body, her hair, her eyelashes all show signs of it. Her body has put on more weight. Her eyelashes grew out more. Her hair grew longer. And more subtle changes all do show that "Mistress" was fairly correct in her initial choice. Excellent work.
In a handful of pages since slave girl transformed, including this one, her eyes have been noticeably purple instead of the normal blue. The hex Mistress placed on her manifested itself as an intense shade of red when it was making physical changes to her body. When her eyes change color, the hex is still making subtle mental changes, helping her normalize heterosexuality and feminine behaviors.
That's not much of a theory, in my opinion. The real theory involves what comes afterward. I think the hex will never truly go away unless Mistress calls it off. It will always be working in the background, perpetually keeping her youthful, beautiful, and, most importantly, fertile. She'll be making half-demon babies for as long as they need her to.
Well, I put my non-canon "another set of lighter chains" on DeviantArt.com. Ten chapters so far. Hope y'all don't mind. Hopefully that will get more people to sign up on your page...