Wait. It's not a reprimand, but she then gets all accusatory? Sounds like the Commander isn't a very good leader at this point... Unless she's going to just turn the Morale Officer loose on the saboteurs.
Of the choices, I'll definitely give the nod to the Hybrid version. The more detailed background definitely enhances the main character's reaction. It IS interesting to see what the AI does with the character, I'll agree, but overall, I still prefer your art style.
Well, I guess that answers her question about what they will be doing until her father's ship shows up. By then, she should be locked into that body for at least a year...
I'm kind of with Banner on this -- I joined because of your art work, not the AI. At the same time, I can see where it does enhance many parts. I'd just hate to see us lose the advantage of your personal skills...
Very nice! This one actually did come out better than the parent in my personal opinion (normally, I think it's kind of a toss-up and tend to come down on the side of the original art, but this one is a definite improvement).
I actually like the parent more on this one -- the hair and expression there seem more fitting for the story than this does. Just my $0.02 worth, so ignore at will.