Ah yeah... you keep telling yourself that ;-) Why do I suspect there is still a surprise or two in your new anatomy and psyche you haven't discovered yet?
Well, for one thing the use of "mistress" even in private thoughts is telling.
Thank you for not just having it be a 'suddenly bimbo' comic, love the defiant struggle
would like to see her hair grow longer as she settles into her new life.
This is really good stuff. I especially like Allison's expression in the last scene. Don't forget. This is a trained soldier who later became a merc, and survived who knows how long? She may not be such an easy mark.
But, like ubo said, her unthinking "mistress" is a bad indicator for her future freedom. Especially when she knows that her captor's name is Esma Vallochar. Not a good sign at all.
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