I used the same line of dialog twice! Argh.
Also I changed the word bubble style.
"you and I are going to spend a lot of time..."
Oh please make it a lot of time
and a lot of panels!
This is gearing up to be a great comic. I love her sour and sweet nature. She humiliates him and then comforts him, it's the perfect way to break somebody down and then build them back up to be your pet. Your dialogue is great in this. And that last panel with her bending over like that, too hot. :)
this is great, love the way you've set up the moment. Been waiting for this, I got my fingers crossed here for a really long, detailed transformation into the slave girl we all love :)
The speech bubble in the middle panel may be the sexiest thing you've ever written.
I love how her ass is pointed right at me.
In that last panel, did you create the language used there, or was it an already created alphabet?
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>In that last panel, did you create the language used there, or was it an already created alphabet?
It's Iokharic script from D&D.
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